Art.

First topic message reminder :

Who here likes to draw?? I sure do. Here are some of my works from a long time ago. I wish I could draw more but sadly I do not have enough time, I have more but my friends keep stealing my drawings so I can't post them haha. Here are the only 2 I could find.

I want feedback also D:

SuBwAyPuNkX3 wrote:

The orange dawn skies changes every day
We only see the color blinded by its beauty
The height is the limit they say,
But when we reached it nothing is impossible
Everyday changes
Everyday life
Everyday routines
The same
Nothing ever happens
Everything is same

I like your poem, It is pretty deep and there are many different ways to look at it.
One problem I have with it is that your words seem to contradict themselves. It's not my poem, so I can't really
say what you are telling, because it is your own poem but...phrases like "Everything is same" and "Everyday Changes"
just don't complement each other because they cancel out. Again, If that is the way you meant to write it, more power to you. If not,
then I think you need to make sure it fits. I know poems are abstract but I just don't know about this one.

Well ShuPiNnA that was one of the 1st poems i wrote in 5 months but most of my poems have a contradiction to it so it leaves the reader thinking

-_-

You could start by working on body proportions I guess. Obviously the shoulders were too big.

oh, and millennium eye ftw? :3

Can't wait for marx... btw could you do both pics i posted?

SuBwAyPuNkX3 wrote:

most of my poems have a contradiction to it so it leaves the reader thinking

Phoenix Wright ftw!

EPICSteve wrote:

-_-

You could start by working on body proportions I guess. Obviously the shoulders were too big.

oh, and millennium eye ftw? :3

Can't wait for marx... btw could you do both pics i posted?

SuBwAyPuNkX3 wrote:

most of my poems have a contradiction to it so it leaves the reader thinking

Phoenix Wright ftw!

Phoenix Wright?

YOU NEVER HEAD OF PHOENIX WRIGHT???

GOOGLE IT NOW!!

Well I don't watch anime at all

All the same... can't wait for marx

lol
yeah
it's not an anime
it's a game

thats how clueless I am on those kind of things

I noticed ._.

Reuku post some of your work

Recent attempts to radically purify "Giygas" Has suceeded... But overwhelmingly! Introducing "Ligas", The embodiment of good! Well, actually this is a paint image. Grasping the true form of Ligas is still dangerous, but in a good way of which I cannot explain.



EDIT: It's a miricle! 100% purification. Introducing... Liygas! It is now 100% safe to look at, it talks clearly and may induce happiness... Still a alien but at least it's not Giegue at all. Completely the opposite.



So, there ya go. In case you have no idea wtf i'm rambling on about, google earthbound. It's a nintendo game

This is classified as digital art :3

Hmm. Since I am on deviantart... Maybe someone else here is... Can you do me a favor and join this perhaps and give it a whirl?

http://www.getwatchers.com/?refby=28463

Gives you views for your art by you viewing others... And + if you sign up with that link I get 40% of the views you make as a bonus! Win win. :3 Anywho imma add my Liygas up there.